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buttercupbaby
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outside in the rain

0 posted 2006-09-25 09:43 PM



people tell me that they envy me
that they're green with jealousy
i don't understand why you
would want to be like me
there's nothing to me thats so good.

let me tell you what i do
when im alone at night
i sit up in my room
trying to fight off
things that cause me fright

i cry till my face in numb
and my tears are my eyes best friends
i don't know how you could cry
till your eyes are dry
cause for me it won't ever end.

i lay on my back for hours
and think about nothing worth time
i don't think anything has crossed my mind
since maybe years ago, and that thought would cost
as much as a rusted broken dime.

im not book smart
or just smart in general
i get by, by the pity of others
if it wasn't for people in this world
i wouldn't hurt,and i would never be another "pretty" girl.

i don't want anyone's pity
and i don't want the envy
i just wanna have a true friend!
is it that hard to be
someone that people will love?

will love me and see me for me?
i know this poem isn't that great either, i haven't been writing well lately..sorry, but this is what i've been feeling lately..so i guess if you understood, it would seem ok or kinda good...idk.

~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2006-09-26 01:19 AM


missy i loved this poem it was very beautifully written and it was soooo idk good WOW!! i can't belive no one has replied to this i loved it...

and my tears are my eyes best friends
i don't know how you could cry
till your eyes are dry
cause for me it won't ever end.

i can relate to this part truly appreciated poem tx for sharing.
hunnie*
p.s going into my library

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

buttercupbaby
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since 2006-05-03
Posts 400
outside in the rain
2 posted 2006-09-26 05:12 PM


omg-thank you SO much! i really didn't think it was that well written, but im so glad you liked it!
-missy
ps-thank you so much=) you're actually a poet i've added in my library!=)

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