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Teen Poetry #8

redo for only 17

nick_lyss
Member

since 2006-08-21

Posts 88

0 posted 2006-11-04 04:10 PM

Only 17

Some people tell me that your not my kind. You are on my mind always cause it feels right and it feels good. If anyone has ever been in love they know that no one can change their mind about how they feel .I dream about you always and praying that you will be mine again .my love for you lives within the heart of me. Boy I want you to hold me and to never let me go. All I want you to do is for you to true to me because its tearing us part. I know I am only 17 but I think I love you.

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

1 posted 2006-11-05 05:42 AM

Can you put it in lines?

nick_lyss
Member

since 2006-08-21

Posts 88

2 posted 2006-11-05 11:40 AM

how do you do that

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