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Teen Poetry #8

A Note and a Rose

WaterFairy103
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since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

0 posted 2006-09-23 07:56 PM

I was a little surprised when it came,
It really was hard to keep myself sane.
I couldn’t believe I wanted to leave,
I thought forever had meant you and me.

But it did come, and I wasn’t crazy,
And the reasons why are still a bit hazy.
I know it’s not right, and not really fair,
I promise it didn’t come out of thin air.

I know I’m in the wrong,
I really do hate what’s going on,
But I have to go, I can’t stay here,
And now that I know, the need, it is clear.

So I’m leaving you, with a note and a rose.
One I don’t want, and one that I chose.
The note explains everything, I hope you see.
And the rose is a symbol of love from me.

I hate doing this, while you’re not here.
But I can’t stay and watch our mingled tears.
Because it’s hard to be the one who goes,
But at least I left with a note and a rose.

When I stopped trying to find the right guy, and concentrated on being the right girl, the right guy found me.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2006-09-24 01:20 AM

Wow i can't belive nobody has replied to this poem. i loved it; it had a nice flow and i can relate to what you are saying. i hope to read more from you soon...
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2006-09-24 06:20 PM

Oh, wow. I really loved this poem by you. It kind of sounded like a song to me...great job!

~Alli~

nostalgic*pride
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since 2006-08-23

Posts 122
NowhereVille

3 posted 2006-09-25 12:37 PM

Good job!! Lol, this was absolutely enchanting. Hunnie, and Allie said it all, very good. Wonderfull, brilliant, extraordinary, marvelous! ENCHOR!

Brittany
Junior Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 32
Canada

4 posted 2006-09-28 06:15 PM

I really liked this poem, I haven't read anything else by you yet, but I will for sure now, this was really good! I agree that it could be a song.

~Life Ain't Always Beautiful~

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