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wwzwlmd8 Member
since 2006-09-23
Posts 96San Diego,CA |
Pain that is what I known, pain is what I deal with everyday. Pain of having no father, pain of people pain of family pain stay's in my mind and will never go away. [This message has been edited by wwzwlmd8 (09-24-2006 04:19 PM).] |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
You might consider the possibility that there is more to pain than this. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Ok, the idea what I could grasp of it through the bad grammar and no punctuation and misspellings sounds good. Please , please use a spell check thing, at least for you poems, and write in in a format we can read. |
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