My ripped and broken heart

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rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

0 posted 2006-09-22 05:42 PM

Dulled knife rip me apart
Harsh words just break my heart
Don’t really know what to believe
After all I was blind, I should have seen

Through all that crap, all those lies
All those jokes all those fake cries
Lying to myself really took its toll
Hoping what wasn’t there tore my soul

Thought they were my friends, thought I could trust
God I was wrong, they succumbed to popularity and lust
They are such cowards, as they couldn’t even tell me
The truth, they don’t really care that they made me bleed

Pretending through each class, that they and I were Ok
How long would they put that up, how many days?
I gave so little of myself away, and still I am in pain
I’ll make them pay; they can walk the halls in shame

Truthful words tear me apart
What they said, rip my heart
Why did they judge, won’t make me go
I can pretend I don’t care, they won’t know

My ripped broken heart
Cracked and torn apart
They may have broken me but I am not done
Hurt me deep inside, but they haven’t won.

pip_man
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 70
Canada

1 posted 2006-09-23 01:12 PM

Hey rhia. I know I have never really replied to many of yourt poems before...but I thought this poem was amazing. I thought that it was one of the best of yours I have read! I loved it! Great write, going into my library!

"When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace."
Jimi Hendrix

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2006-10-04 03:26 PM

i loved this poems it is like my fav. from you so far i'm going to bump this up up up to the top I LOVED this:0
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-10-04 05:21 PM

Hi Rhia,

I liked this one also, the implied-ness of the poem is what really catches my attention. It leaves a lot up to the imagination and I find that to be rather refreshing to read.

Thanks for sharing!

"I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->---

gypsyheartx
Member

since 2006-02-09

Posts 104
Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland

4 posted 2006-10-04 09:15 PM

"They may have broken me but I am not done
Hurt me deep inside, but they haven’t won."

I love these lines, and this was a great poem. I can really relate, thanks for sharing

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

5 posted 2006-10-05 04:56 PM

Thank you for all replying, I will try to look for your poems and reply to those

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