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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2006-09-20 01:57 PM



i always wish you'd find someone new,
my guilt has brought me back to you,
i realized then i didn't love you that way,
now we don't talk i have nothing left to say,

you don't phone anymore than you talk,
this has come as quite a shock,
the time has come for me to leave,
i'm not that young and so naive,

now i'm gone,
and it didn't take you long,
to make me feel mean,
but it's not like you couldn't have seen,
i don't love you

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

© Copyright 2006 Krysti - All Rights Reserved
heysexy
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lumby
1 posted 2006-09-21 09:41 PM


thats amazing.....

maria ormel

wwzwlmd8
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2 posted 2006-09-24 06:02 PM


If you were at a live show I would give you a standing ovation.


anniep8806
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3 posted 2006-11-06 11:56 PM


I really liked this poem.
nick_lyss
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4 posted 2006-11-07 01:17 PM


i really liked too. i wish i could get over ex. how did you.
hunnie_girl
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5 posted 2006-11-10 12:30 PM


well courtney, it wasn't really that easy i just thought to myself if he doesn't want in a relationhip anymore and he is willing to forget me that fast then he isn't worth me hurting over, i know i will find someone new one day... and i know that could have a happier ending it might take awhile and it takes time but i just stay busy as much as possible. i hope you figure out stuff with your ex,
best wishes,
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

whitelielovely
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6 posted 2006-12-11 08:47 PM


i love your stuff i don't even go looking for you and you seem to be the only one besides nick_lyss that i read. this one i felt very connected to. i joined this site to get insight from people like you.

W.L. Lovely

hunnie_girl
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7 posted 2006-12-13 12:45 PM


hmmm wow thanx Lovely although haha i forgot i wrote this poem amaaazing
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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