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rhia_5779
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0 posted 2006-09-19 05:07 PM



You are someone new
Forgot all of our jokes
I don’t know you
Fake niceness on loan

Who are you, what have you done
My best friend, missing changed
She used to be where has she gone
Because of you I feel so much pain

Can totally tell that you no longer care
About our plans all of our dreams
Didn’t realize this is what I needed to fear
that  you might have stopped believing

I have known you most of your life
But the new fad is to just let go
Best friends forever, no, not right
What happened to that special flow

Of happy moments, playing around
Delighting in crushes, secret sharing
Picking each other off of the ground
Not judging by what they’re wearing

I don’t know you, you have turned
Into the thing that we have always hated
Exactly whom we always spurned
If your still here, can’t tell looking at your face

That is someone who no longer feels
Someone who has drifted into a world of fake
This is sad how you don’t know what’s real
Your ex-best friend, I don’t know you as of late.

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2006-09-21 12:12 PM


i kinda got the jist of that poem but what happened to your friend what made him/her change? well if you don't mind me asking... that poem described your feelings well i liked it not one of my favs by you but it was pretty good...
hunnie*

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heart.

rhia_5779
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2 posted 2006-09-21 12:56 PM


we didnt see each other for long time around the summertime and she started haning out with who we both had hated. after a couple weeks they dropped and picked her up again. then they dropped her and decided they didnt need her. she came runniing back to me. still trying to carry wht they had been like. and i saw her when she was hanging with her "friends"
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3 posted 2006-10-08 12:53 PM


awe that sucks but i hope your feeling better now. i hate when somebody goes behind your back and does things like that. sorry it took me so long to write back.
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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