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Lean On Me
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Lean On Me |
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krazy 4 her Junior Member
since 2006-09-14
Posts 38Your parent's front porch |
Lean on me and we'll walk Until those tears can no longer fall Take my hand and we'll run Answering freedom's call Lay beside me and we'll talk You can get rid of all your confusions Lean on me and we'll breath Clearing our minds of these delusions Lean on me and we'll charge Storming into a blazing fight Take my hand and we'll leave Dissapearing into the night Lay beside me and we'll dream Of a world with not but peace Lean on me and I swear That I will never leave ~~So, it's not the best poem I've ever written. But leave me alone, I tried didn't I?~~~ |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
o contar the best maybe i have heard from u so far. very good. blown away |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
i've been waiting impatiently for you to finally post another poem and then there it was and i loved it it had a nice flow... good write  ...hunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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