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nostalgic*pride
Member

since 2006-08-23

Posts 122
NowhereVille

0 posted 2006-09-15 02:41 PM

You see me,
and you think you know everything about me.
But, you don't.
You've seen me cry,
seen me angry,
and seen me laugh.
But you haven't seen me.

I am not the butterfly,
fragile as her wings.
I am not the typhoon,
angry as can be.
I am untitled.
Don't judge me.

I know you're trying,
to understand me.
But can't you see,
that's not a possibility.
I am unwritten, unchanged by time.
Unstoppable, yet stoppable,
unafraid, and terrified.

I am not the butterfly,
fragile as her wings.
I am not the typhoon,
angry as can be.
I am untitled.
Don't judge me.

Please try not to understand,
just take me as I come.
For even I don't know the truth,
of where my heart comes from.
Just love me,
for my everyday.
Don't analyze my life.
I am untitled.

I am not the butterfly,
fragile as her wings.
I am not the typhoon,
angry as can be.
I am untitled.
Don't judge me.

I love you,
for your simple things.
I don't try,
to understand everything.
And if you, love me too,
you'll take me
as I come.

And that's untitled

~~~This is actualy a song I wrote for my friend's garage band. Hope you like it!~~~

deceitful_siren
Junior Member

since 2006-09-14

Posts 20
USA

1 posted 2006-09-15 02:54 PM

O ya, I've heard them play this before. Doesn't Katie sing it? Or is it Liana? Oh well, I had no idea you wrote this one for them. Great write, I love the flow it has. But, to really understand it, the song has to be heard not read. You might have considered keeping this one to the band. =)

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2006-09-15 07:39 PM

I really liked the poem, too bad I can't hear it being sung with music and everything.
Thanks for sharing!

~Alli~

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2006-09-15 09:31 PM

yea haha you need to get some back round music:P haha but wow this was awesome i liked it bet a lot of people can relate to this

hope to read more poems soon and it's so cool you got your sis and friend to join

...good write
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

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