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rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
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0 posted 2006-09-14 05:42 PM



heres a serious poem


why do people always believe?
that it only matters how your seen
cakes of makeup, way over the line
short short skirts never look so fine

trying to be someone you are not
will never make you seem hot
being beautiful is about more that
doesn't matter how much make you wear or about being fat

don't be fake and lie
try it, just be nice
being beautiful, having appeal
oly works if you can keep it real

it doesn't help to act like a slut
to act dumb always saying what
being beautiful, is to be unique
dunno bout you but im gonna be ME!!!


this is kind about a bunch of the girls who graduated from my very old school

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nostalgic*pride
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1 posted 2006-09-14 06:09 PM


I totally agree with everything you say here. This poem is so true, and I can relate. Big Time. Fantastic job.
hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2006-09-17 11:18 PM


i agree it was good i wanna be me too good write ...
hunnie*

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3 posted 2006-09-18 12:13 PM


I agree.  Being YOU is the best thing you can do!

~Alli~

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