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hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2006-09-14 01:08 AM

you look at me with disdain and scorn,
making me regret i had been born,
you give me one of your smug looks,
reading my mind like an open book,

it makes me sick looking at your smile,
i'd love to see you cry once in awhile,
and the times i have seen you cry,
it's when you lied and said you would try,

what you did to me was sick,
you said you'd get help what a trick,
what a lie you told once more,
wait and see what you have in store,

it's either you or I,
one of us has to go that's no lie,
this small house isn't big enough,
living in the same world peoves tough,

i'm done blaming you,
for everything you do,
i'll wait until the end,
so i can try to leave again.

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

nostalgic*pride
Member

since 2006-08-23

Posts 122
NowhereVille

1 posted 2006-09-14 09:25 AM

I really enjoyed this piece from you. All of your works are great, but this was excellent!

deceitful_siren
Junior Member

since 2006-09-14

Posts 20
USA

2 posted 2006-09-14 09:38 AM

Ello. My sister (above) has told me sooo much about you. And she was right. This poem is absolutely amazing. Fantastic!!

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2006-09-14 06:11 PM

Hey Krysti, this poem was very intense and I really enjoyed reading it. I just hope that this poem really isn't true and that you're doing ok!

~Alli~

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2006-09-14 10:49 PM

acually sadly it is true

but i'll live haha thanks for all your replys
hunnie*
or now y'all know my name Krysti

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

5 posted 2006-09-15 09:11 AM

I can relate... I hope things improve for you in the near future, sooner rather than later

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

6 posted 2006-09-15 10:22 AM

very good poem, hope things work out for u. were all here at pip if u wanna talke

krazy 4 her
Junior Member

since 2006-09-14

Posts 38
Your parent's front porch

7 posted 2006-09-15 11:03 AM

Is this to your step-dad? Mom's boyfriend? Well, if I'm completely wrong don't laugh at me it just sounds like it is. Good job. You certainly have talent.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

8 posted 2006-09-15 09:35 PM

CORRECT you have won the million dollar prize

haha kidding but yea it is my mom's boyfriend... and tx y'all for responding and thanx for being there for me cuz sometimes it seems like no one else is but hugs to y'all

hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

heysexy
New Member

since 2006-09-18

Posts 5
lumby

9 posted 2006-09-21 09:51 PM

i luv it..its so sad thou ...but yeah u sure have a talent for this hell i mean u say i am good well u better

*wishfull*thinking*
Junior Member

since 2006-09-03

Posts 33
north east of england

10 posted 2006-09-22 02:48 PM

excellent although i cant realate i know the feeling if you know what i mean

but anyways well done
keep up the good work and i look forward to seeing more from you

*wishfull*thinking* (dani)
x

was known as poiseandrationality and sinsandtragdegies but long story

*coz i've seen love die way too many times when it deserved to be alive

wwzwlmd8
Member

since 2006-09-23

Posts 96
San Diego,CA

11 posted 2006-09-24 02:24 AM

I hope your doing better and great work on your poem. Thank you for the tip you gave me.

Brittany
Junior Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 32
Canada

12 posted 2006-09-28 05:18 PM

This is such a powerful poem omg, it's really good. I hope things are better for you soon!

~Life Ain't Always Beautiful~

lovergurl
Member

since 2007-05-08

Posts 59
va

13 posted 2007-05-10 11:19 PM

WOW!
I love the way you wrote this!
And, I hope things get better.
Very very good.

Becca.

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

14 posted 2007-05-11 05:38 PM

I'm really sorry krysti! I hope things improve in the near future! reallllly near future!

God will send his love down to you hun, i know it..

I always love your poems.. this one included.
Good luck hun, and God Bless you love<><

~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

15 posted 2007-05-14 06:07 PM

thanks you all for replying

hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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