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pip_man
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since 2006-07-15

Posts 70
Canada

0 posted 2006-09-10 06:26 PM

Your touch aludes my thoughts,
Your smile is all I see.
I stare myself to sleep,
Thinking of you and me.

I can't help but call it love,
No pain I feel inside.
No longer am I lonley,
I no longer need to hide.

If this feeling is true love,
I hope it never ends.
I hope we stick together,
I don't want to be 'just friends'.

As I dream at night,
I will only think of you.
I will think of us together,
Will you think of me too?

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2006-09-10 10:14 PM

Hey, welcome to Pip! I really enjoyed this poem, isn't the feeling of love just the greatest?
Well, I hope to read more from you soon! Keep posting.

~Alli~

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

2 posted 2006-09-10 10:42 PM

"Your touch aludes my thoughts,
Your smile is all I see.
I stare myself to sleep,
Thinking of you and me."

I loved this part. It was too cute and at the same time so well put. I wish you would have made it a liiiiiitle longer just cause I was enjoying it but it was good at it's length too. Anyways, nice write, hope to see more soon!

AIM-beatufu1tragidy

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stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-09-11 09:34 AM

Ohh! I really, really, agree with everything said above me^^

I loved this poem; it is very sweet and beautiful poem to read. I also kind of wish it was longer just so I could continue reading more; maybe you could do a sequal? I don't know... very good job though

I hope that you will continue to post more in the near future; thanks for sharing

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2006-09-11 11:55 PM

wow i loved this!!!!! i haven't read a poem by you in so long i was reading through the poems the other day and i said hey i pip_man hasn't posted on this site for a long time so when i saw your name i had to read it right away

hope to read more soon...
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

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