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pencil&paper
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since 2006-09-09

Posts 76
asleep somewhere in my head

0 posted 2006-09-10 04:16 PM

I'm watching through a window
Watching through this damn window
As life floats by
I'm stuck watching
Waiting
Debating
Should I join in,
Or should I just keep watching, waiting, and debating?

(i was feeling isolated that day)

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2006-09-10 10:35 PM

I really liked this! Although the poem it self isn't very long, it doens't matter because there's so much you can get out of it. I can really relate to it. Great job!

~Alli~

By the way, I've been wondering if perhaps you're pen&paper's twin? :-P

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2006-09-11 09:31 AM

Well, it might be short but it has one powerful punch behind the words! I really liked this one; I felt it was the perfect length also. This poem also has a unique kind of question to it, which makes it an interesting poem to read.

Thanks for sharing

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2006-09-12 12:31 PM

wow... is there anything else to say? i loved this! although it was short.

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

pencil&paper
Member

since 2006-09-09

Posts 76
asleep somewhere in my head

4 posted 2006-09-13 08:09 PM

ok I know it was short but I really couldn't think of anything else to say and I kinda like it the length it is it says pretty much all I wanted it to.

and yeah I do know pen&paper she's one of my best friends, I made the pen name I did so on here we would kinda like be connected. does that make sense?

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2006-10-05 10:11 PM

well.. i acually meant there is nothing else i could think of saying but wow not meaning it was too shory but the poem was great. Yes thats cool how you are connected. it was a good length...
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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