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0 posted 2006-09-09 10:02 PM



There’s someone else inside of me
Who I always seem to show
When it is not the time
To deal out verbal blows

I’m not sure who she is
But she isn’t very nice
This horrid girl inside of me
Seems never to think twice

She says some awful words, you see,
That really shouldn’t be said
And when I go to school , next day,
I hope she stays abed

Perhaps this horrid girl
Will someday mend her ways
Perhaps she’ll let the nice one                                                                                                 Live the rest of my days

I guess this a “wait and see”
Though I hope its not to long
‘Cause of this horrid girl inside of me
Everything goes wrong

Perhaps the other side of me
Will conquer her and triumph
It seems now though that glorious day,
Isn’t nearly near enough

© Copyright 2006 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-09-10 01:14 AM


hey u know who it is, apparently i'm now known as "candles"
any way i like it i think there can be a mean girl inside of all of us at one point or another

PS good excuse, mind if i borrow it

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2 posted 2006-09-10 11:21 PM


I remember this poem from a while back.  As I said before, great job with it!

~Alli~

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3 posted 2006-09-19 01:17 PM


i loved that there is someone horrid in us all but i know you can win if you want to...
hunnie*

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