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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
The Correction Yes I’m fourteen, but don’t underestimate. I fought the battle to open the gate of my desired fate; I write poems full of hate to oppress the ones that give me bad rates. Not those at PipTalk those are my side mates. Learn to appreciate, you don’t always have to compensate. Open your eyes! It came to your surprise that I have you as bait, Don’t try to deviate, For you are too late, Isn’t it bad that from a scale out of one to a thousand, you are only eight. Get off my back, throwing on all this weight. And “No…” This is not a given trait, I was born knowing to devastate. You better thank goodness that a while back we dissociated.  [This message has been edited by Mr. Omniscient (11-03-2006 10:14 PM).] |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
acually this was very interesting... who knew so many things rhymed with underestimate  although some parts were a little off. my fav part would have to have been the beggining up to:Yes I’m fourteen, but don’t underestimate. I fought the battle to open the gate of my desired fate; I write poems full of hate to oppress the ones that give me bad rates. Not those at PipTalk those are my side mates. the rest was not the best but nice vocab:0 hunnie  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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