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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 06-07-2009 06:58 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger


I made trees out of stones there at our cove
and you climbed over them with bare feet on
I heard you swallow words you didn't use much
but I didn't really care where they ended up

there was a pepto bismo sunset spilling down
and you said the pink place sky was like your tan
missing in places I could only imagine
but if I was curious enough you would stay over

to teach my hands how to turn your poetry
into just a woman with love in her eyes
and I could pen pottery while you slept
and have time to cure it in your whispers after

then glaze it in the residue of your smile
before we pressed it between our rib caves
and let our fire turn flesh tones into iron
not the brittle kind, but pliable and content

bathed in the dawn moisture like porcelain gods
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daark

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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 06-07-2009 08:30 AM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

i love your sculpting
of both woman and word
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


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and let our fire turn flesh tones into iron
not the brittle kind, but pliable and content

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Love that smooth side of the dark...
not to mention the way you spin it.


Dark Stranger
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3 posted 06-08-2009 07:34 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms inki..thanks babe

___________

ms bluezy, thank you brat (grin)
Margherita
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Eternity


4 posted 06-09-2009 05:08 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

quote:
but if I was curious enough you would stay over

to teach my hands how to turn your poetry
into just a woman with love in her eyes
and I could pen pottery while you slept
and have time to cure it in your whispers after

then glaze it in the residue of your smile



It is your curiosity that makes you a master ... in poetry and pottery and everything else you touch with your blessed fingers.

Love,
Margherita
Dark Stranger
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thanks ms mar
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