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Open Poetry #44
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
0 posted 2009-06-06 10:46 PM



My Love

When you and God
get together
and decide upon
a reasonable date
come to me
my precious darling,
come into my arms
my special friend,
my beautiful lover,
my life,
my love...

JamesLee
06June
2009
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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-06-06 11:09 PM

Yo James,

This is a lovely love poem.  Good work.

Bobby
kindredspirit
Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156
2 posted 2009-06-07 07:17 PM

the ... at the end feels like unspoken emotions. good write.
LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
3 posted 2009-06-10 10:53 PM


She certainly sounds like something special

James, I wish you luck.

Lindsay
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