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My Love

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JamesMichael
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My Love

When you and God
get together
and decide upon
a reasonable date
come to me
my precious darling,
come into my arms
my special friend,
my beautiful lover,
my life,
my love...

JamesLee
06June
2009


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Robert E. Jordan
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Yo James,

This is a lovely love poem.  Good work.

Bobby
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the ... at the end feels like unspoken emotions. good write.
LindsayP
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She certainly sounds like something special

James, I wish you luck.

Lindsay
 
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