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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows

0 posted 2009-06-06 11:14 AM





Ah quiet agree witchuu Dahlin
Ah bin hearing de whorl flyin buyme,
Ah bin seeing widowt watchin asound
till Ah feel whot de whorl habin sayin,
Ah find it abound widda pikcha
widowt sharin a signal note.

Sing for the joy of the living
but none for the grateful dead,
they hold a joy we're still praying is real,
they live without need for belief
while here in my darkness
I sit tired,
half blind
for yearning relief.

©2009 by icebox
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1 posted 2009-06-06 01:05 PM


Ah, a response to our Witch - well done!
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2009-06-06 10:32 PM


and da gobblins'll gitcha ef ya don't watch out!

*grin*

I did see mine error, today, and I was gonna fix it, but then I thought...nawwwwww...



You "get" me without explanation.

poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
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india
3 posted 2009-06-06 10:40 PM


It is flowing. Amazing with its craft.

clever talks delay friendship!

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