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A Beautiful Disaster
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0 posted 06-06-2009 04:24 AM       View Profile for A Beautiful Disaster   Email A Beautiful Disaster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit A Beautiful Disaster's Home Page   View IP for A Beautiful Disaster

I press the button and renew
The page with someone's masterpiece.
I see a so-called review
Of letters less than letters missed.
The comment's author claims to be
A bard, a critic and a muse.
This three-in-one, or none-in-three
Can't get the core of someone's views,
Of thoughts in their poetic flight.
Yes, it is hard - they tend to flee,
But it's the artist's one true might
To see what other eyes can't see,
And poets for a day or two,
Who shape a random phrase by chance,
Who haven't proved a sentence true,
Just have no right to set demands
For those who ponder, dare and speak,
Who search, discover and create.
Their fame is yet to reach its peak,
And as for you, it's way too late.
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1 posted 06-06-2009 01:41 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I used to bang out a poem a day, so know your sentiments on this well.  I find when you write for yourself it takes much longer, and the poem eventually is worth the wait.  Well done.
BluesSerenade
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2 posted 06-06-2009 07:58 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

It all makes sense now  Writing from the heart is where my muse lives,  
even though she'd rather nap all day,  I'm always happy when she stirs me.

Neat poem.
brneyedgrly
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3 posted 06-10-2009 06:16 PM       View Profile for brneyedgrly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brneyedgrly

i like your writings, disaster...

~I am the keeper of what he cast off~

HAZARD
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since 06-24-2009
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4 posted 06-24-2009 08:31 AM       View Profile for HAZARD   Email HAZARD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HAZARD

Haunting and worth several reads - nice lyricism - and poignant - Liked this.

HAZARD
 
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