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Open Poetry #44
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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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0 posted 2009-06-05 09:34 PM

Where ever Bones is,
what ever Bones is doing,
Bones always has that

“Hey Mister,
don’t you want
to take me home?”

look in his
big brown eyes.

Bobby
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Make me laugh
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since 2009-06-06
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1 posted 2009-06-06 09:39 PM

short, but sweet
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2009-06-06 09:46 PM

Thanks "Make me laugh",

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.  

Welcome to the forum.  I like your handle.

Bobby
poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
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india
3 posted 2009-06-06 10:41 PM

Very poignant, I am losing those eyes.

clever talks delay friendship!
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 posted 2009-06-06 10:52 PM

Thanks Poddarku,

Yes it is poignant, and sad.

My oldest daughter has beautiful brown eyes too.

Bobby
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