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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-06-05 07:40 AM


maybe it was your perfect furrow
self tended mostly you mentioned
when shopping for a hoer for the weeds

that you often kept hidden mostly
since your high fidelity didn't allow
you to serve more then one god at a time

but you did have the courage to judge me
though your millions were made in slight
of hand smooth pipes with wordless words

and I always adored your color of salad
and the seaside salty sipping you spit
out your nose like milk when laughing

at how jealousy looked on the other heathen

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daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-05-2009 09:11 AM).]

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-06-05 11:25 AM


What is a hoer for the weeds?

Though this made me sneeze ... it still was a very captivating read.

Love,

Margherita


BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2009-06-05 11:34 AM


but you did have the courage to judge me
though your millions were made in slight
of hand smooth pipes with wordless words

and I always adored your color of salad
and the seaside salty sipping you spit

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Boy you toss up a saucy poem.  How about I just drool intead of spit?  

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2009-06-05 12:53 PM


ms mar..landscape person I guess you could call them?  thanks lady

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ms bluezy, I would always love your lip gloss babe!!  thanks

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