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Part Deux: I'll Charm You Yet.

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viking_metal
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0 posted 06-04-2009 11:49 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for viking_metal


Perhaps I am in love,
with the idea
of being in like with you.
But it's well worth
the price I might pay,
every payday
purchasing an excuse
to stall and talk to you.

So interesting are you,
a faucet
dripping smiles.
Each splashes
as it hits the shower floor.
Explodes into multiple laughs
that I share
with only myself,
and your memory.

The consistent tapping
of water on ceramic,
whispers harmless lovers secrets
that I ought to share with you
but cannot.

Not yet.


________________________________________________

-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

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Rex Allen McCoy
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1 posted 06-04-2009 11:54 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

nothing fills the heart faster than anticipation

very nice
viking_metal
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2 posted 06-05-2009 06:08 AM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Haha -- Wise words, Monsieur Rex.

Thanks for the read, sah!


-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Kaoru
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3 posted 06-05-2009 09:06 AM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

You could always do the bird of paradise mating dance, I hear women are awfully impressed by that.

Enjoyed your write, remember, patience is a virtue.
viking_metal
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4 posted 06-05-2009 11:18 AM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

My Dear Kaoru...

Thank you for the kind words. I'm a pretty patient guy.

I usually do the chicken dance. Bird of Paradise is a bit advanced for me.

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Kaoru
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5 posted 06-05-2009 01:00 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

I guess that can be sexy too if you add in a couple moves of flair. Good luck.
Margherita
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6 posted 06-05-2009 01:31 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

quote:
Explodes into multiple laughs
that I share
with only myself,
and your memory.



Beautifully said! You are doing great!

Love,
Margherita
viking_metal
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7 posted 06-05-2009 01:47 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Kaoru... I'll break out the leather thong that I finished bedazzling yesterday. I'm sure that ought to do the trick.

Margo... Thanks very much ma'am.

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

RedStoneEB
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thats a interesting way of putting it to be in like with you, pretty clever piece.

never really thought of it like that.

viking_metal
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9 posted 06-05-2009 06:04 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Fanksh. I try.


-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

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10 posted 06-10-2009 01:32 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Paul and ______ sittin' in a tree
K-I-S-S-I-N-G

Pay me a dollar and I'll go away and leave you alone.  Honest.

Good poem ... you made me smile.

A
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11 posted 06-15-2009 11:28 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

You rock allaboo

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

 
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