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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2009-06-04 10:58 PM


Bones has always been way grateful  
when people chance to treat him well.  

In his working everyday world,
that just doesn’t happen often.  

He wishes that it did,
Bones likes to feel good
about his world.

The street can be
such a cruel
and savage place.  

Bones is always grateful
when it treats him well.

Bobby

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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-06-05 12:27 PM


To feel gratitude is so important. I am glad to hear that Bones has reason too to be grateful and that he has the sensitivity to express it.

I bet he loves to feel well within his world. Sometimes it happens, though it is hardly a permanent state.

Thank you Bobby.

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2009-06-05 12:50 PM


Thanks dear Margherita,

It's good that you know Bones well.  He has a very thin and sensitive skin.  He also lets people know that he likes and appreciates them.  Bones has a lot of good friends.

Love Bobby

fmlbarebackrider2001
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3 posted 2009-06-05 03:01 PM


Bobby,
  Your Bones and my D sounds an awful lot alike. I see D through Bone's eyes.Love this.

Cory

"Not everyone can be heros. Someone has to sit on the curb and clap as they pass by." Will Rogers

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2009-06-05 03:53 PM


Okay - so Bones is treated well so maybe he just doesn't take sufficient notice often enough for it to stick in his memory.  He's a complicated character who like me should perhaps learn to be ... simple.

Helen

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2009-06-05 05:02 PM


Thanks dear Cory,

Your "D" sounds like a great person.  I think I like him already.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2009-06-05 05:04 PM


Thanks dear Helen,

You might have a good idea for Bones.  However, Bones is way too busy being complicated to take time out to be simple.

Love Bobby

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