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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2009-06-04 03:31 PM

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2009-06-04 05:44 PM

Very Lovely, Bill~~ I am enjoying your words and pictures.

M

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-06-04 07:10 PM

Yo Bill,

This is a fancy picture poem combination. I like it okay.

When ending a sentence with an ellipse, don't forget to use four dots.

Bobby

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2009-06-04 10:07 PM

A lovely picture Bill with words to match,

Much enjoyed.

Lindsay

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2009-06-04 11:07 PM

Hi there BC~

This is such a tranquil setting..
Loved the peaceful drift and graceful moves..

I especially liked your last verse..

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

5 posted 2009-06-04 11:49 PM

feel a little sadness in this one
~
nicely written

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2009-06-05 10:42 AM

ah Bill, I think I will feel blissful/wistful all day long with this being my first poem to read today

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2009-06-05 11:28 AM

quote:
to hear this water flowing gracefully along
is music to my ears, sounding as a song

Dear Bill, you made me immerse in your tranquil and serene water song.

Simply beautiful! And I adore the picture.

Love,
Margherita

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

8 posted 2009-06-05 08:48 PM

Bill

You are right - the sound of the waterfall is the most relaxing feeling a person can have. I too suspect some sadness in the last paragraph. It sure can get you to some deep thinking. Enjoyed the picture and the words.

Ariana

Rose of Sharon
Junior Member

since 2008-10-05

Posts 19

9 posted 2009-06-06 11:03 PM

Bill

I love the graphics and the lovely words that flow as serene as the water.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2009-06-07 08:47 AM

Thank you all for stopping by for a read. I deeply appreciate all your replies...

BC

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