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fmlbarebackrider2001
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since 2005-11-16
Posts 138
West Texas, United States

0 posted 2009-06-04 02:16 PM


I handed you my heart,
I handed you my love,
I handed you my life,
Hoping you’d never give them up.

I handed you my dreams,
I handed you my prayers,
I handed you my goals,
Hoping you’d share.

I handed you every thing,
The keys to my life.
What you’ll do with them,
Is not for me to say.
But whatever you do,
Remember, my life will never be the same.

"Not everyone can be heros. Someone has to sit on the curb and clap as they pass by." Will Rogers

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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2009-06-04 02:45 PM


ms c..one must belive that the other will find value in the gift..enjoyed this
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2009-06-06 07:02 PM


The people who cross our path in life enrich it in some form or antother.  
If nothing else, we live and learn and hopefully come away with a better
understanding of patience and tolerance.

Good read, I really enjoyed your thoughts.

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA
3 posted 2009-06-06 10:17 PM


Oh yes! Once you hand over everything to them, our lives are never the same. I suppose there are some, whose lives are better, than what it was before hand.
poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
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india
4 posted 2009-06-06 10:40 PM


Very romantic
kindredspirit
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since 2009-05-19
Posts 156

5 posted 2009-06-07 07:13 PM


this is the definition of the trust that you place in those that you love.

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