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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2009-06-04 07:46 AM


rain song
sky saliva from cloud kiss
pine tree women with wet hair
they moan their dancing toes
in damp black earth

river's children are streams
with gurgle laughter edges
and belly button shimmering
reflections of morning
at the breasts of mountain mothers

black stones leftover
from night salad with moon
just a slice for color
and scent of nightingale voices
peppering echos on silent

yesterday wore her as mirrors


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2009-06-04 08:36 AM


Why in the world would this
make me hungry?
Just the time of morning,
m'thinks.

Enjoyed the morning ramble, ds!


Dark Stranger
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West Coast
2 posted 2009-06-04 09:32 AM


ms sun..nice to feed you/r eyes
thanks babe

Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2009-06-05 04:46 PM


quote:
river's children are streams
with gurgle laughter edges
and belly button shimmering
reflections of morning
at the breasts of mountain mothers


Totally amazing, dear D.! Words are your dancing partners ... you make them fly to your firm grip of creative guidance. And you charm them into a performance that calls for a standing ovation.

Love,
Margherita


kindredspirit
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since 2009-05-19
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4 posted 2009-06-07 07:38 PM


your words rejuvenate an age old art, creating and redefining, until it is new and vibrant with life.
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-06-08 07:33 AM


ms mar, thanks special lady

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kindred..thank you for the read and comments

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