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Dark Stranger
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your eyes gave me your answer early then
like there were boards off the wall of you
and something chilly was being a breeze
making your woman places want my arms

just part time, and friendly you suggested
but you had longer moments in your glances
like it was something permanent like paint
and you wanted more then just one coating

you left the windows open on your soft sighed
and acted like proper didn't really suit you
but you were afraid to know my hard reality
or how my hands would fit around your fragile

storms are always more lovely when left indoors
when lovers can take the time to savor them
wearing their residue like wallpaper over nothing
then pressing together to remove their wrinkles

before night comes to bend them over stone again


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1 posted 06-03-2009 12:46 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

"but you were afraid to know my hard reality
or how my hands would fit around your fragile"

And sometimes hard reality fits like strength much needed by weakness.

Enjoyed.
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2 posted 06-03-2009 01:29 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

D

I am not sure that anyone writes of longing the way you do.  You so understand the two sides of many women (and men too?) - the "proper" that you often refer to - and the grittier side.  You realize, understand, and (I think) love that dichotomy.

Thank you again for touching my senses.

A
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ms K...the safe place of hard hands
sometimes is the sooth needed by fragile, thanks lady

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ms ali-san, I am trying to stay in tune with the pair of ducks you speak of yes...thanks babe
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4 posted 06-03-2009 03:38 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Is this where I stoop to the "You quack me up!" line - or should I mutter, "Duck" instead and think of invitations?

A
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there in dark waters
scraping against the rocks of
the cove of her heart.

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ms indi..I would call you sometime
but that is not really your name is it
thanks babe
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You know what you do
DarkDevil.

Amazing.
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ms UBP..moi?

thank you for looking in on this ms..

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enjoyed
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thanks van
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storms are always more lovely when left indoors
when lovers can take the time to savor them
wearing their residue like wallpaper over nothing
then pressing together to remove their wrinkles

The title caught my attention... and I'm so glad it did. *S* Soft, sensual, gritty, gripping... your pen writes a rollercoaster I can't wait to ride again. *S*
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thanks babe!!
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brilliant!

~I am the keeper of what he cast off~

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14 posted 06-11-2009 07:48 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

thanks lady
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