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Eros3
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since 2009-06-01
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South Africa

0 posted 2009-06-03 03:47 AM


Is she still an angel, with those tattered wings?

The crooked halo, the rock songs she sings.

Is she still an angel, with her innocence lost?

Naivety destroyed, the bridges she crossed.

Is she still an angel, with her gothic dress?

Fishnet stockings, her hair a mess.

Is she still an angel, with those tears in her eyes?

Is she still an angel, when she cries?


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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-06-04 09:38 PM


Yo dear Eros3,

Angels are made to last.

Love Bobby

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