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unboundpoetess
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0 posted 2009-06-03 12:27 PM


this halo glimmers asphyxiate charms
to a slave of slipknot eros noosed

I wear his shackled freedom
and burn like ripe vagaries
plucked on gehenna afternoons

when he plies confessions
parted lipped and loosed
spilling open ended conjuration

he casts sorceries for words
etched vertical across my back
staining merlot chaste

so I will hold my demons closer

and the slithered serpents tease my seams
pose to finger permissions
as I scatter on exodus wings
every good intention

firedancing
I writhe

behind a web of sighs

and god

my god

I sin behind these eyes...

H

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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2009-06-03 06:30 AM


ms UBP..when a woman whispers
she sins...when she sins
she whispers with a smile...

enjoyed this dance

unboundpoetess
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since 2008-05-24
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2 posted 2009-06-03 11:41 PM


here's to grinning sibilance...

Thanks BigD.
H

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2009-06-04 12:32 PM


unboundpoetess - interesting write, well done...

BC

Bloodline
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since 2009-05-23
Posts 236
Oklahoma
4 posted 2009-06-04 08:18 PM


Sensuous and suculent,
and lingers on the tongue,

Bloodline

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2009-06-05 12:36 PM


Hmmmm, loved this sultry sensual concoction>

Very nice, and very HOT!!


Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
6 posted 2009-06-05 12:44 PM


quote:
firedancing
I writhe

behind a web of sighs

and god

my god

I sin behind these eyes...



Smiles! What an effectful conclusion to this captivating, passionate write!

Love,
Margherita


unboundpoetess
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since 2008-05-24
Posts 477

7 posted 2009-06-05 03:33 PM


Mr. Bill

Thanks so much, dear!


Bloodline

Glad to meet you, and thank you for kind comments.


Blues

Glad you stopped in, and thanks for the hot!


Margherita

TY! You are always such a doll.

Warmly,
H

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