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Shadow Angel
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some days are just...


It is a blue tide
that crashes my blue day
I pause to watch
with blue eyes
the whispering waters
the gossiping stones
and the river that sings
with eyes closed
holding nothing
but the ocean
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Dark Stranger
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lovely view of your day ms
Margherita
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Eternity


2 posted 06-01-2009 12:43 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

I do love your blue day, dear Sasha! Beautifully expressed!

Love,
Margherita
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loved "gossiping stones"

Adore you here,
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4 posted 06-01-2009 03:59 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

"Just"

It's probably one of my favorite words because it can imply so much.

Enjoyed your words, and I look forward to more.
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


5 posted 06-01-2009 09:29 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Ooooooooooo yea!!

Love the sound of this, with my eyes closed!

Very pretty~

ctowen
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just ..... imagine, and feel
           see and sea
           live the view

           justly


      Craig
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You write beautiful poetry in blue.

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