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I'm Certainly Foolish Enough to Hope You're Single.
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I'm Certainly Foolish Enough to Hope You're Single. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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Uncommonly Unintimidated. Perhaps you enjoy the not overly lean, but muscular frame. The unkempt Irish beard. Strong, plain eyes. Perhaps you will call the number at the end of the witty once sentence note I handed to you with a smile. "Call this number, it's the right thing to do." You didn't read it right away, but you told me you were excited. I told you I was embarrassed, and you laughed at that. Maybe this will work out right. ________________________________________ -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
I hope it does work out right, your poem certainly did. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
o_O Are you getting a girlfriend? Dang, missed my chance! Hehe, jk. Enjoyed the pome. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is funny, Paul, and I am sure it will work. Witty remarks are the perfect ingredient for what you have on your mind! Love, Margherita  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Paul, What is a: "once sentence note"--huh? Bobby |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Osprey... Thanks much. My dear, wonderful, Kaoru... I wouldn't be so entirely sure. Oh there's always going to be a spot here in Stillwater for you. Harharhar... -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Margherita... Thanks much, madame. Robbus... "Call my number, it's the right thing to do." -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
viking_metal - this is good, a note to call with a hope it will happened. Nice write... BC |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Here's hoping, my brother of the north.  |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
BC... Thanks man. Suncleaver... Many thanks, brother of winter.  -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
You are wondrously charming here, Viking. H |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Stuff like this will get you "some".  ATTENTION, I mean. too cute |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yep every time I read you it makes me smile, you are a very good flirt!!  |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Unbound... Thank you, tell the women in my life this. Serenity... Harharhar! Thank you, mademoiselle. My dear SEA... Aw, thanks! That means a lot. At least you're smiling, right? Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Sometimes all we can do is put our hopes in a poem - fold it up like an oragami crane and let our imaginations soar. That's how I see it anyway. A |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Truef, dawg. I heart thou, mademoiselle Alahoon. -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gosh darn it, Paul! I lost the note with your number on it!!!   Linda |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Harharhar. Thanks for reading, mademoiselle Earth Angel. Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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