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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-05-29 07:29 AM


I saw lonely as diamonds in your eyes
and thought it was something curable
with slow hands and the man kind of kind
and you saw it too in mine
like it had just arrived a moment ago

we laughed sometimes back then
at the edge of that maybe street
where we talked about crossing the line
and getting each other all over us
if for only momentary fulfillment

I guess that is what we had in common
that comfort of mutual discomfort
and you didn't want to be lonely at fifty
nor did I at sixty you imagined
but you would keep yours a little longer

because it was easier then arguing
with the cold man that you danced with
and I would keep mine too you predicted
since you didn't see me giving up freedom
to be just a prisoner of contentment

but you didn't know I could just ride faster


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Gaia
1 posted 2009-05-29 08:54 AM


Seductive brilliance, amigo.
I'm keeping this to warm up the chilly nights.

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2 posted 2009-05-29 09:17 AM


I'll tell ya something, Dark. If I'd come across your poetry 20 years ago, it would definitely have been used to unscrupulous ends. I'm not talking plagiarism, just ammunition.(winks)

[This message has been edited by Osprey (05-29-2009 11:44 AM).]

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2009-05-29 09:31 AM


ms midnite...thanks lady!!

______________

oz..thanks my friend, and..one can never have too much ammo.

Bloodline
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4 posted 2009-05-29 09:53 AM


A vista of images in every word,

Bloodline

Margherita
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5 posted 2009-05-29 12:39 PM


quote:
I saw lonely as diamonds in your eyes
and thought it was something curable
with slow hands and the man kind of kind
and you saw it too in mine
like it had just arrived a moment ago

we laughed sometimes back then
at the edge of that maybe street
where we talked about crossing the line
and getting each other all over us
if for only momentary fulfillment

I guess that is what we had in common
that comfort of mutual discomfort
and you didn't want to be lonely at fifty
nor did I at sixty you imagined
but you would keep yours a little longer

because it was easier then arguing
with the cold man that you danced with
and I would keep mine too you predicted
since you didn't see me giving up freedom
to be just a prisoner of contentment

but you didn't know I could just ride faster




This poem is an EVENT.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2009-05-29 01:17 PM


Bloodline. Thank you much friend
_____________


Ms mar thank you sweet lady

Indigo
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7 posted 2009-05-29 03:36 PM


prisoner of love
a paradox of yearning
for more or for less.

You are an uncommon man, D.
Indigo

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2009-05-29 03:52 PM


Indi

Would you have me any other way?

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
9 posted 2009-05-29 04:59 PM


You make me weak in the knees, and then make me look.

This is special, like Margherita said, it's an event, and what do you know..

I still got my number.   Hmmm, yea!!!


SlowlyFallAway
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10 posted 2009-05-29 05:00 PM


I would kill to have your mind.
vandana
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11 posted 2009-05-29 06:46 PM


nice read
Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2009-05-29 06:46 PM


Bluezy. You are a love song babe, thank you
____________


SFA, I did lose it so you might find it floating somewhere. Lol. Thanks so much


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Thanks Van

unboundpoetess
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13 posted 2009-05-30 03:14 PM


You really are something, D.
Outstanding.
L,
H

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2009-05-31 06:52 AM


UBP...thanks so much lady,
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15 posted 2009-06-02 01:51 AM


Sometimes I read your poetry and can only think of replies that sound awkward or too gushing.  The fact is when I strip all the superlatives away - I am left with this need to read more and to read poems of yours I have read before.

This is really what it is all about for me - I read you with my first cup of coffee.  I read you when I am rushing out the door.  I read you in between my day and I read you before sleep.  It doesn't matter when I read my Dark Stranger poem - it only matters that I get my fix.

Thank you for addicting me.

A

nakdthoughts
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16 posted 2009-06-02 06:55 AM


I feel like Alison, although I don't always reply...

but this one D, is truly you from before, during and after and I especially love this since I am coming upon that 60 very soon  

"I guess that is what we had in common
that comfort of mutual discomfort
and you didn't want to be lonely at fifty
nor did I at sixty you imagined
but you would keep yours a little longer

because it was easier then arguing
with the cold man that you danced with
and I would keep mine too you predicted
since you didn't see me giving up freedom
to be just a prisoner of contentment"

Here's to you always "riding faster"


with very kind thoughts,
M

(btw, I think I missed wishing you a happy one)

Dark Stranger
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17 posted 2009-06-02 07:16 AM


ms ali-san..and they say addicts are sexy!!  thanks babe I am humbled by your comments.


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ms MMs thanks for the read and recognition...and the wish. I know your sexty will be fine!!

Alison
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18 posted 2009-06-10 01:00 AM


When I read this the first time - what a week ago now? - I felt as mesmerized and speechless as I do now.  

A

Dark Stranger
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19 posted 2009-06-10 07:12 AM


ms ali-san..speechless is so cute on you..thanks little one
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20 posted 2009-06-10 08:50 AM


Another of your happy addicts checking in. *S* Even the Keys didn't keep me from missing your words. *S*
Dark Stranger
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21 posted 2009-06-10 09:49 AM


ms suthern..my favorite candy is addict flavored and served at body temperture....thanks lady
Margherita
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22 posted 2009-06-14 05:15 AM


Sigh, man of art and heart, you made me come back to read this again and it won't be the last time. It's just outstanding work.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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23 posted 2009-06-14 07:12 AM


ms mar, thanks lady friend
Margherita
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24 posted 2014-10-13 04:41 PM


I see that in 2009 I said it won't be the last time ... and here I am, so happy to have come to the archives for a while.

It is still an event!

Goodness gracious, you can't deprive us Pipsters of your work! So please serve us some of your unique and spicy poetic appetizers! Will you ...

Margherita

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