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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 05-28-2009 09:35 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

the palms there, part time, a rented heaven
like children fingers opening the sky
peek-a-boo curtain to watch adultery
as if it were child’s play but easier

then the blushing face of dawn rising
from the sigh sound music too loud
for her to sleep her hangover through
and you know how she is when she wakes

with wanting running down her complexion
calling it a sunrise or something stronger
that made her restless for darkness
the kind she can never get enough of

so she watches you smile and shakes her head
then looks into my eyes and whispers
how she was there before you and after
and we were usually alone together

when she touched my metal places with her warm
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1 posted 05-28-2009 10:55 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

quote:
how she was there before you and after
and we were usually alone together

when she touched my metal places with her warm



And "she" surely shows how it feels when she melts in the sun for her lovers, the metal gods.

Incredibly captivating, dear D.! Your poem got soul.

Love,
Margherita  
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2 posted 05-28-2009 10:55 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

sensual and soft
always, a pleasure to read you
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 05-28-2009 11:36 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms mar...thank you lady!!

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ms midnite, thanks for the eyes here
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4 posted 05-31-2009 02:20 AM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

"and you know how she is when she wakes"

Made me think of me when I wake, and it isn't pretty..

Beautiful writing, D.
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5 posted 05-31-2009 06:49 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms k...I imagine you are quite lovely when you wake...long as it is later in the day?  thanks lady
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quote:
and you know how she is when she wakes

with wanting running down her complexion


~  this is wicked good, DS

I used to read the poetry of a Dark Stranger years ago in a place called Poetry Castle...is that you?

you have a distinctive poetic voice, my friend
beautifully unique and a joy to read this, tonight

*hugs*

Sasha xx

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 05-31-2009 07:47 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Ms SA. Welcome to Pip'z Zoo lady. Yes I did drift around there from time to time seems ages ago.

Thanks for the nod!!
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8 posted 06-10-2009 12:43 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

D,

You almost make me want to get earlier.  What a tribute to dawn - she is lovely, this lady dawn.

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9 posted 06-10-2009 08:59 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

so she watches you smile and shakes her head
then looks into my eyes and whispers
how she was there before you and after
and we were usually alone together

It's your fault I have no words. *G* You've taken them all, arranged them into stunningly beautiful lines... and left me speechless.
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10 posted 06-10-2009 09:48 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms ali-san, thank you little one..

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ms suthern, oh you got words baby!! thanks lady
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