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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2009-05-27 10:31 PM




Twilighted, in this hour
closing in, the dove
released, baring witness, a skylit sea
wrapped in loves caress, on an altar
of freshwashed sands, silhouettes
print alongside the ancients, blued
by the awning that covers,
wishes blown of white petal reminder
and feathers of friends, shells pearled
with treasures of luck and longevity

shedding shoes
baring hearts
touch to touch

they marry today

(for my daughter's upcoming nuptials)

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (05-28-2009 04:17 PM).]

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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2009-05-27 10:39 PM


Well it looks like congratulations are in order.  
This is very special, good goddess...
you should have it printed on the invites.

Happy Wedding days!!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2009-05-27 10:43 PM


smiling wide

oh but you're lovely in this light, Mom.

beautiful

and OOOOH

nod

I left this for Maureen, but knowing how you love trees, you should see this too:
http://bp2.blogger.com/_opptvFBa4ck/R_JiZikU2-I/AAAAAAAABBI/A_QyTRxQ1ro/s1600-h/ImagTreeRailing.jpg

Though I suspect you'd like leaves on yours.



love you mish-gorgeoush

and congratulations on the happy event!

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2009-05-27 10:52 PM


thank you ladies...
I will check that , thank you Karen

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2009-05-28 12:40 PM


inkedgoddess - congratulations on the nuptials. Precious write to go with it...

BC

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-05-28 09:22 AM


congrats inki!!  
Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2009-05-28 10:54 AM


A beautiful write. Congratulations to you, Mom, and best wishes for your daughter and future son-in-law!

Margherita
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Eternity
7 posted 2009-05-28 11:03 AM


quote:
wishes blown of white petal remember
and feathers of friends, shells pearled
with treasures of luck and longevity



Your poetic mother heart makes for an exceptional wish blown into their solar plexus.

Congratulations for the upcoming event!

Love,
Margherita

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
8 posted 2009-05-28 11:21 AM


My sister married this last October.

Don't be the crazy mother-in-law.


Nice write, madame Goddess.


-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
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9 posted 2009-05-28 04:17 PM


thanks guys and dolls
always glad to see you stop by

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
10 posted 2009-06-03 08:46 AM


I could only hope that I'd receive something so beautiful on my day (if it ever comes, lol).
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
11 posted 2009-06-03 11:21 AM


I literally got tingles all over me as I read this goddess gift for your daughter's "upcoming nuptials".

It is beyond beautiful.... Here they come again! ~ More tingles.

May they have a long, loving, prosperous, healthy, mutually supportive, and joy-filled life together!

MicheleRose, you truly write like the Nature goddess ye be.  

Love & Light,
EA

ctowen
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12 posted 2009-06-03 02:54 PM


I thought I had replied to this already ... most have been another time, another place.

   I believe another toast is in order!!!
                 (Here, here!!)

   Craig

vandana
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13 posted 2009-06-03 05:22 PM


enjoyed
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