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Elemental Warrior
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North Carolina


0 posted 05-27-2009 12:06 PM       View Profile for Elemental Warrior   Email Elemental Warrior   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elemental Warrior


What wind blows north

Only the sun may know

With the flow of the world

the dust gathering

Shall he be known.



In the cool of the rise

What blazes go south

The drink runs smooth

While the strengths share

Shall she be known.



What flow splits

Brought the heat

Betray the still

That creates the bone

Shall IT be known.



What wonders may pass

And adventures can float

To the gentle breeze

Our sun must be

Will they bestow

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A Romantic Heart
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since 09-03-99
Posts 5497
Forever In Your Heart


1 posted 05-27-2009 12:08 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

~Welcome Keith!

A very Powerful entrance to PIP!
you arrive with a bang!

Enjoyed your poem!

~ARH
viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.


2 posted 05-27-2009 05:12 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

True. Quite a fireworks show for a first post. Impressive.

-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Elemental Warrior
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3 posted 05-27-2009 09:34 PM       View Profile for Elemental Warrior   Email Elemental Warrior   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elemental Warrior

Thank you for your replies. I'm amazed anyone liked them. Is there anything I can work on with it?
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