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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-05-27 12:06 PM


Darkness surrounds me as I lie in this place
Inside my mind is the outline of your face
I feel your hand interlocked in mine
I feel you, my imagination inclines
Although such a distance keeps us apart
I still feel you here, I feel you in my heart
I can’t stand your warmth missing around my chest
The warmth you give me when you lay your head to rest
For the time being, your loves warmth will do
But nothing can equal the warmth of holding you

I can only picture you beside me within my mind’s cries
A picture’s worth a thousand words, but million’s in your eyes
I dream dreams of a life with you lasting forever
Sleeping beside you I’ll make sure were together
Night after night, dad after day
Something’s finally going my way
I can only hope that he won’t come snatch you
My grasp is so tight love, my arms will entrap you
There you’ll be safe for eternity’s span
I’m pretty sure that all of this is part of His plan

Times change, people and places grow old
But through all of it my heart you’ll still hold
I promise, love, this is completely true
Second after second, I’ll always love you
Sometimes in life things take you by surprise
I knew this was true when I saw myself in your eyes
I can’t wait to look into those gems once more
When I stare into them I see your soul’s inner core
What composes your actions and writes your sweet words
Lies within those two.


© Copyright 2009 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Rex
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1 posted 2009-05-27 11:03 AM


Very tender and lovely indeed. Well done.

Regards.

TheAnonDavid
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2 posted 2009-05-27 11:35 AM


ARH
The question you seem to ask, though subtly and silently, is, "Can love still burn brightly though both are far apart?"
To reassure you, I know of a love that first sparked across a 4,500 miles gap - and that distance has now diminished so that both are happily together.
Give it time, it does happen.

A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2009-05-27 11:35 AM


Thank you Rex, for reading and replying!
it is the greatest joy of a poet, or a writer,
to be read, listened to, heard.

~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2009-05-27 11:39 AM


David,

Thank you, yes long distance relationships are hard, but not impossible, I guess your love in a long distance relationship is a higher love, a stronger love, a test of time...

thanks for the encouragement and the insight!

~ARH

Suncleaver
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5 posted 2009-05-27 01:23 PM


A gentle sublime thought, and a beautiful gift.

I can't wait to look deep into your soulful eyes, so full of passion and love once again.

All my love, Luke.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2009-05-27 02:40 PM


My Luke,

The  meeting of our eyes, our souls, will
be one of intense love!

Waiting is the hardest part,
but worth it~

~ARH

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