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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 05-26-2009 07:47 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

those things we did inside our minds
like we were both someone else
with someone else
and we were most of the time
except for those glance dance times

when you were taller then he was
and were looking over his shoulders
to see if my eyes were wearing you
and they always were all you had on
when my mind went there with you

you unbuttoned a smile when he looked away
and left it open for the evening
before it got caught on my eye
and unraveled into bedroom whispers
that we could both read in our thoughts

like reciting poetry together separately
watching each other's lips moving
and wishing we were touching them to hours
with some crazy kiss magic potion
that our saliva would turn into then

and make us invisible to our tomorrows


___________

daark  (forbidden)


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1 posted 05-26-2009 04:35 PM       View Profile for kindredspirit   Email kindredspirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kindredspirit

...and she's being danced away. behind her eyes, the world occurs in a moment, an hour, an entire night.

you invoke free thoughts in me.

this is beautiful.
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2 posted 05-27-2009 07:28 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

KS, thank you for the read and comment!!
Margherita
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3 posted 05-28-2009 12:47 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

quote:
those things we did inside our minds
like we were both someone else
with someone else



I love this hint at multiple selves starring in the play.

Fantastic!

Love,
Margrit
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4 posted 05-28-2009 01:05 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms mar...thanks lady friend
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5 posted 05-28-2009 01:16 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Oh do I remember this well, I think this actually got me more than anything, it was the look!  Eventually I couldn't touch his shoulders.

when you were taller then he was
and were looking over his shoulders
to see if my eyes were wearing you
and they always were


I just loved this one, printed it out the savour the flavour.

Carpe' Diem,
Mysteria

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ms myst..thanks so much lady!!
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7 posted 05-28-2009 09:21 PM       View Profile for Bloodline   Email Bloodline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bloodline

A knowing pen can open
the readers eye, as you have,
enjoyed,

Bloodline
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8 posted 05-29-2009 01:39 AM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Wonderful write..then again, you're a wonderful writer, so I'm not at all shocked.
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9 posted 05-29-2009 07:09 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

thanks bloodline....


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ms k..aw,,thanks lady!
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~   omgosh...sighhh  

your pen is as passionate and sexy as ever, my friend

loved this

*hugs*

Sasha xx

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Ms SA. Thanks lady
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12 posted 06-10-2009 12:50 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

D

I love the unbuttoned smiles.  What a wonderful expression and picture I have now.  This is special.

Alison
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