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suthern
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0 posted 2009-05-24 09:31 AM


On this journey
Too long awaited,
Too late executed
I seek your smile
With intense listen.
Will this wind
Or gentle waves
Whisper your voice?
Heaven surely shines
With increased brightness
But on these dark shores
Tears drip into the sea.

missing Marge

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Rex
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1 posted 2009-05-24 11:33 AM


Well done sentiment of loss. I can relate.

Regards.

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2009-05-24 11:38 AM


Your poem is full of love and gentle memories.

This is a real beauty, suthern gal~

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3 posted 2009-05-24 11:54 AM


Yes, Suthern One, if we really listen, we
can hear Willow White Feather's gentle voice carried on the winds and the rolling waves of the sea.

A lovely reminder of our soul sister.

Love & Eternal Light,

Linda

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4 posted 2009-05-24 12:02 PM


Beautiful and poignant, dear Ruth. I do believe Marge remains connected to us through these blue pages too. Her energy of love is felt.

You conveyed intensely what so many of us feel. Thank you!

Love,
Margherita

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5 posted 2009-05-24 01:12 PM


Lovely, Ruth. I miss Marge too. She was the first to welcome me to PIP.
                       Ida

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6 posted 2009-05-24 02:10 PM


As soon as I read the title, I thought of Marge. I should have known this would be for her. Beautiful job.((hugs)) suthern....I'm missing her too.
Klassy Lassy
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7 posted 2009-05-25 11:50 AM


A lovely lady, also the first to welcome me to PIP. She did touch all who knew her with such an enveloping warmth.


...she must know the lovely touch of your own tender heart.

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8 posted 2009-05-25 04:14 PM


Ruth,

I have been thinking of Marge too and missing her flowers.  You write of your longing beautifully.

Know what?  Our tears are what makes the oceans so magical.  I bet Marge is turing your tears to those sparkling diamonds that we see dancing on the water.

You know she will make them beautiful.

Love,
Alison

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9 posted 2009-05-25 04:30 PM


Ditto!  Thanx Suthern...
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10 posted 2009-05-25 04:35 PM


Awwww Southern, I miss Marge too. There's not a day that goes by, when I don't think about her.
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11 posted 2009-05-26 09:50 PM


We all miss Marge Ruth, Thank you for this poem! ~ In remembrance of Marge ~ Prayer huggies


ARCTIC WIND

suthern
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12 posted 2009-06-01 12:35 PM


Thank you so much, my friends... I appreciate your responses so very much. *S*

I started planning this vacation last year and,, a visit with Marge was the first "must do" I penciled in. When I saw an exit for DeLand, it took a lot of deep breaths to keep tears at bay... when the beaches were void of even her full moon, the missing got the best of me.

Thank you for receiving my grieving so kindly.

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