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abhursty
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0 posted 2009-05-23 11:58 PM



tears fall on the page
no one cares is what they say
all they do is fall all day
but only on the page
not for judging eyes to see
for they only fall for me
they wont fall for you
that i know is true

i wrote this when i was really sad and it pretty much says what i do. people never see me cry because i write it all down.

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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2009-05-24 04:05 AM


I enjoyed this because sometimes, that's what I do, too. Well done.
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2 posted 2009-05-24 12:05 PM


Writing your thoughts down is a wonderful way of releasing pent up emotions. It can be very cathartic and free us up for all the good schtuff!


EA

abhursty
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3 posted 2009-05-24 12:28 PM


yay people actually like my poems ^_^
ty peoples

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