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Open Poetry #44

Buyers Remorse, For Lovers.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-05-22 12:14 PM

Each fiber
of my being
wants to find you.

Seek out the important parts,
touch them-
with tendrils of light
and airy kindness.

The fibers,
they reach to grasp
and find nothing.

Each fiber,
one by one-
withdraws.

Begins to paint
your naked
eyes and ears

how precious they are.
__________________________________________
-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2009-05-22 12:29 PM

I'd like to know where you shop.

Enjoyed.

(And yes, perhaps it is a Minnesotan thing, but I still consider myself a hearty Texan no matter how long I've been here!)

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2009-05-22 12:40 PM

You're only two hours from finding out, eh?

Thanks for reading, Kaoru. It's cool to have another person that cares about my writing attempts and ventures.

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2009-05-22 01:55 PM

*sighs*

dude this rocks

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2009-05-22 03:43 PM

Dude, SEA. You're where it's at. Cat's meow. Bee's knees. A real jive turkey.

Thanks. I love that you get something out of my writing.

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

5 posted 2009-05-22 06:30 PM

Paul- This is an absolutely exquisite write. When my Muse finally comes back off vacation, I pray that she brings me such as this.

But this one goes to eleven...
http://www.hubpages.com/profile/RingoShort

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

6 posted 2009-05-22 07:12 PM

Ah, I could be only so lucky.

Thank you sir.

-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

7 posted 2009-05-22 07:24 PM

Yo Paul,

Kindness is always good.

Nice work.

Bobby

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

8 posted 2009-05-22 11:33 PM

Thanks Bobby. You're the bomb.

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

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