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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-05-22 08:18 AM



something natural about unnatural you said
made my poems a bit like dirty perfect
just the way you liked reading things
between the lines that were out of line
for those proper polish kind of people places

and then you laughed when I showed up anyway
on the harley with give a damn in my eyes
and they all turned and looked for reasons
to think I shouldn't be there and for someone
to be the one to show me the exit

I knew it would be you that had the nerve to
since we would be fighting for air soon anyway
in some motel room where the proper was broken
and we could just turn our animals loose
to tear holes into the sighs, again repeatedly

and he would come looking for you later
as if he knew to give us enough time
before bringing your favorite car around
to take you back to your lady way place
on the upscale side just outside of mosey town

where there was something unnatural about natural
___________

daark  (highway series)

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2009-05-22 08:42 AM


Only for him...

I mean, "the proper was broken"

smile

It's kinda like getting down on the down on grammaw's bed...stop me anytime...

I'm bad.


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-05-22 09:25 AM


serene would never stop you..

thank you lady

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3 posted 2009-05-22 11:01 AM


Visions of unnatural dance in my head

A

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2009-05-22 11:44 AM


ms ali-san...shhhhhhhhhhh quit thinking those thoughts..
BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2009-05-22 12:29 PM


Oh boy, this proves to be another great series from you.

"Why don't we do it in the road" comes to mind.

Classic, DS~



Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2009-05-22 12:37 PM


ms bluezy...

if ya wanna?  thanks babe

Margherita
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7 posted 2009-05-22 12:55 PM


Sounds to me as if you were kind of a spicey side car pleasure for a spoiled lady ... your highway stories are of appealing nature! I am pondering the unnatural aspect ... nature's ways are infinite.

Great poem, welcome to the new series!

Love,
Margherita

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8 posted 2009-06-09 01:24 PM


made my poems a bit like dirty perfect
just the way you liked reading things
between the lines that were out of line

Exactly! *S*

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2009-06-09 02:14 PM


ms mar, thanks lady friend...

______________

ms suthern..thank you

brneyedgrly
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10 posted 2009-06-10 07:12 PM


and then you laughed when I showed up anyway
on the harley with give a damn in my eyes


so cool...you are master class, dark...

~I am the keeper of what he cast off~

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2009-06-11 07:47 AM


thank you browneyes
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