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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 05-22-2009 08:18 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger


something natural about unnatural you said
made my poems a bit like dirty perfect
just the way you liked reading things
between the lines that were out of line
for those proper polish kind of people places

and then you laughed when I showed up anyway
on the harley with give a damn in my eyes
and they all turned and looked for reasons
to think I shouldn't be there and for someone
to be the one to show me the exit

I knew it would be you that had the nerve to
since we would be fighting for air soon anyway
in some motel room where the proper was broken
and we could just turn our animals loose
to tear holes into the sighs, again repeatedly

and he would come looking for you later
as if he knew to give us enough time
before bringing your favorite car around
to take you back to your lady way place
on the upscale side just outside of mosey town

where there was something unnatural about natural
___________

daark  (highway series)
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serenity blaze
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1 posted 05-22-2009 08:42 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Only for him...

I mean, "the proper was broken"

smile

It's kinda like getting down on the down on grammaw's bed...stop me anytime...

I'm bad.

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 05-22-2009 09:25 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

serene would never stop you..

thank you lady
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3 posted 05-22-2009 11:01 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Visions of unnatural dance in my head

A
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 05-22-2009 11:44 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms ali-san...shhhhhhhhhhh quit thinking those thoughts..
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


5 posted 05-22-2009 12:29 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Oh boy, this proves to be another great series from you.

"Why don't we do it in the road" comes to mind.

Classic, DS~


Dark Stranger
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6 posted 05-22-2009 12:37 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms bluezy...

if ya wanna?  thanks babe
Margherita
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Eternity


7 posted 05-22-2009 12:55 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Sounds to me as if you were kind of a spicey side car pleasure for a spoiled lady ... your highway stories are of appealing nature! I am pondering the unnatural aspect ... nature's ways are infinite.

Great poem, welcome to the new series!

Love,
Margherita
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8 posted 06-09-2009 01:24 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

made my poems a bit like dirty perfect
just the way you liked reading things
between the lines that were out of line

Exactly! *S*
Dark Stranger
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9 posted 06-09-2009 02:14 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms mar, thanks lady friend...

______________

ms suthern..thank you
brneyedgrly
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10 posted 06-10-2009 07:12 PM       View Profile for brneyedgrly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brneyedgrly

and then you laughed when I showed up anyway
on the harley with give a damn in my eyes


so cool...you are master class, dark...

~I am the keeper of what he cast off~

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11 posted 06-11-2009 07:47 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

thank you browneyes
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