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firechild
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since 2009-05-18
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0 posted 2009-05-21 03:43 AM



Cherry blossoms

florescent wings,
aloft
a honey-layered crust
a heart, elevated
ignite the cerebrum
with ethereal delights

a soul, cloaked
with the rhythmic cadence
of cherry blossoms
echoed
on the virginal breath
of spring

as he melts
and she walks,
pass
the jealous daffodils…


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-05-21 05:54 AM


Welcome dear firechild, to Pip!

Your poem is absolutely delightful!

Looking forward to reading more of you.

Love,
Margherita

firechild
Junior Member
since 2009-05-18
Posts 14

2 posted 2009-05-21 06:05 AM


thank you Margherita

your comments are most wellcome.

cheers

firechild

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2009-05-21 09:26 AM


Welcome, Firechild. Hope to see more of your lovely poetry.
                             Ida

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2009-05-21 02:12 PM


Hello, firechild! Your poem has me smiling ~ and feeling good!

..."cherry blossoms
echoed
on the virginal breath
of spring"

That is downright 'poetical'!  Those were just a few of my favourite lines!

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

Earth Angel

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2009-05-22 10:12 PM


Love the sense of whimsy.  

Very cute and clever poem!

Much enjoyed, and a warm welcome to PIP~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2009-05-22 11:39 PM


I've danced among falling cherry blossoms, and my feet retraced each step while reading this delightful write!
Welcome!

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