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I'm Sorry To Say

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SoftSoul94
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0 posted 05-20-2009 12:06 PM       View Profile for SoftSoul94   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SoftSoul94

Hello everyone.

This is my very first poem, I hope you like it

I'm sorry to say,
That you're my first and my last.
I'm sorry to say,
That I can't forget the past.

I'm sorry to say,
That I loved what we had.
I'm sorry to say,
That now I'm feeling so sad.

I'm sorry to say,
That I know you're with someone new.
And I'm sorry to say,
That I'm still in love with you

© Copyright 2009 Nadia Vilby - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow


1 posted 05-20-2009 12:07 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Pretty soon you will get past the sorry and go through the not sorry at all.

Well done, and welcome to pip!
Sunshine
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2 posted 05-20-2009 04:40 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Yes indeed, welcome to PiP!

Please check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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with you


3 posted 05-20-2009 04:46 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Welcome

enjoyed, very good rhythm  
Midnitesun
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Gaia


4 posted 05-20-2009 05:03 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Welcome to Pips.
Sorry to say, some of us remember saying something very similar.
Enjoy your time here!
WTBAKELAR
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5 posted 05-20-2009 06:14 PM       View Profile for WTBAKELAR   Email WTBAKELAR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WTBAKELAR

Well it's about time you got here!
Do you know how long we have been waiting for you?

I'm sorry to say we missed you all this time.
Glad you finally made it

Welcome to the Blue Addiction.

Tracey.
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


6 posted 05-20-2009 06:16 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

SoftSoul94 - nice write for your first post, expecting to see many more...

BC
Zuel Furion
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7 posted 06-07-2009 04:25 AM       View Profile for Zuel Furion   Email Zuel Furion   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Zuel Furion

so beautifull to see the rewards when fear is challenged.

love the work Princess. keep going.
kindredspirit
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8 posted 06-07-2009 07:30 PM       View Profile for kindredspirit   Email kindredspirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kindredspirit

keep writing!
Verve
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9 posted 06-08-2009 07:30 AM       View Profile for Verve   Email Verve   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verve



Nicely done. Simple and effective!!!

Welcome to PIP! =)
Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 06-08-2009 09:01 AM       View Profile for Robert E. Jordan   Email Robert E. Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert E. Jordan

Yo dear SoftSoul94,

This poem is well organized, and works well.

Love Bobby
LindsayP
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11 posted 06-09-2009 01:29 AM       View Profile for LindsayP   Email LindsayP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LindsayP


A warm welcome to PIP and I'm not sorry to say that you will enjoy it here. nice post.

Lindsay
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