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Chalmette Guy
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0 posted 2009-05-18 01:01 PM


Through the mists of time
Love is ever immortal
Bequeaths its life upon lovers
A never broken circle

And though the love may wane
Fade to a ghost that is left behind
Languishing upon the mortal shore
It can still be recalled in the mind

Always there are remains
Pieces that never wholly die
Yet float to the surface
With every closing of the eye

These are the things that shine
That help us all live forever
Treasure the collection of ghosts
And suffer not their loss ever


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1 posted 2009-05-18 08:03 PM


"And though the love may wane
Fade to a ghost that is left behind
Languishing upon the mortal shore
It can still be recalled in the mind"

Particularly enjoyed these lines. Very much enjoyed this work.

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2 posted 2009-05-19 01:09 PM


Always there are remains
Pieces that never wholly die
Yet float to the surface
With every closing of the eye

How very true... and how we welcome such ghosts. *S*

Absolutely beautiful! *S*

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3 posted 2009-05-19 01:31 PM


"Treasure the collection of ghosts
And suffer not their loss ever"

yep

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