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The tradeoff
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The tradeoff |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Collectively they've become mute, too many storms have resorbed them as winter struck deep, their extremities numbed from affliction, irreversible in the butterfly's greed connected through iced over ponds, the shadows inject, what the roots never read drawn to the west bracing the east once again winds threaten their stature as for me, I refrain from lamenting of loves casualties, my bleeding now sparce on the surface, in lieu of the great lacerations I'd belt out in ballads my writing has reeked of serenity but my spleen stays intact within me. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Powerful, dear Michele. Your writing is complex, thought provoking always, it has the scent of authenticity. Love, Margherita |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
from east to west and i'm just looking for my north |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
loved your closing lines on this one...unexpected, but perfect... |
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