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Marcia MT
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since 2009-05-15
Posts 36
California USA

0 posted 2009-05-15 03:59 PM



Introspection

Winding roads through miles
of land where no man
has cut down trees
to build his dwelling so fine.

Feeling as though no one
has ever walked here before
virgin land untrod
by man in his quest for adventure.

There’s peace to be found here
where wildlife still roam freely
amongst tall pines,
in shady valleys.

Chancing upon a trickling brook
pausing to wonder
to where it travels,
from whence it came.

The air is pure and
cleanses the senses
as I listen to the quiet
a sound unlike any other.

Back into the world endowed
with a different perspective
a deeper insight creating a longing
for more of that which is as yet unspoiled.

© Marcia Miller-Twiford


© Copyright 2009 Marcia Miller-Twiford - All Rights Reserved
Namyh
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since 2009-01-20
Posts 988

1 posted 2009-05-15 04:26 PM


Marcia - Perhaps, there is an innate yearning in our spoiled and modern society for the unspoiled where we can hear our thoughts without car horns, people shouts or TV. My bags are packed and I'm ready to go. Thanks for the reminder Marcia. Enjoyed. Namyh
Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
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Oklahoma USA
2 posted 2009-05-15 07:02 PM


Marcia, I truly enjoy reading your poetry. I am so glad you have joined Pip.
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3 posted 2009-05-16 02:17 AM


Your poetry reads like "clean" to me.  It's uncluttered and beautiful in simplicity.  I like it - and I have shared these thoughts on some of my rambles.

A

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