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greytree
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Wales

0 posted 2009-05-15 12:51 PM



I would have held you for a thousand years,
now I crumble into cliched tears.
Your innocence assures you're just
in adoring your fresh faced lust.

Forever, I strived so hard to acheive
To give you all you could want or need
but your doe eyes were quick to crave
the excitement that new men gave.

I would have waited forever at your door
but those thousand years are mine, no more.

In such an ugly time, beauty is the real protest

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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2009-05-15 12:52 PM


*sigh*

Your years will always be yours.. Beautiful writing, though it hurts.

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