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Open Poetry #44

A Wind to Carry Away

KRU DK
New Member

since 2009-05-13

Posts 4
Denmark

0 posted 2009-05-14 09:55 AM

A wind may take a man,
but two who stick together, the wind cannot lift.
If you stay united with your friends, you'll be safe and sound.
Though will you act on your own no responsebility can be thrown,
at those who just wanted to be your friends.
So stick together,
until you can't no more,
until death leads you away,
to a place in peace to call your own.

(Continues, I think)

14-years and bored.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-05-14 06:38 PM

I love the title and your thoughts in this poem. Welcome to Pip!
Your footnote says "14 and bored" ... that's bad I think! At your age there are so many exciting things to discover. Read, observe, learn, study! Also you might try the Teen Poetry forum here at Pip and maybe you will be less bored.
Love,
Margherita

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