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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-05-14 07:51 AM


I guess it was how your bucket looked
or that you wanted my hands instead of yours
to fill it faster then your usual

and then carry it too up the hill
to our own secret desert with dunes
and no body can see us trees, like walls

where we could play house and doctor
and other kinds of games without names
that would make us feel a little bit dirty

but you said you loved it that way better
without all of the proper lady play stuff
and that you knew that I was bad for you too

but maybe that was why I was your favorite


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1 posted 2009-05-14 10:27 AM


I've written a poem on the same subject. Just a humourous, little ditty it was; certainly no match for your inimitable touch.
No wine today, so the head is clear.(winks)

Oz (shakes head in admiration)


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-05-14 11:28 AM


humble thanks Oz..and, I am sure you did her (the topic) proud.
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3 posted 2009-05-14 11:50 AM


"but maybe that was why I was your favorite"


..you are certainly one of mine.

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2009-05-14 02:30 PM


ms K...now you are teasing me..thanks lady!
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5 posted 2009-05-16 01:17 AM


You make me smile and want to play too.  I always wanted to be a doctor and figured if I only applied myself more, studied more, spent more time learning the human anatomy - well then I figured I could become one.

Maybe I could sign up to be an intern?

A

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2009-05-16 07:03 AM


ms ali-san, I am sure you would be a great student...first of all close your eyes...trust me I am a doctor...this won't hurt...thanks lady
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7 posted 2009-05-16 11:20 AM


"but you said you loved it that way better
without all of the proper lady play stuff
and that you knew that I was bad for you too"

sometimes
it would be nice
to let your guard down
and...
live life on the other side
of that window
not looking out
but sighing
the open air



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8 posted 2009-05-17 07:09 AM


"bad" sometimes exercises such an irresistible attractive force and it might well have its "good" sides.

Sighing. This is lovely.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2009-05-17 07:10 AM


ms slick....so true babe!!  thanks so much
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ms mar...thank you sweeet lady

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10 posted 2009-05-19 11:48 AM


but you said you loved it that way better
without all of the proper lady play stuff
and that you knew that I was bad for you too

but maybe that was why I was your favorite

No maybes about it. *S*

You do know I'm talking poets, right? *bratty grin*

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2009-05-19 12:31 PM


ms suthern..you and that bratty grin....thanks babe
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