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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2009-05-14 12:15 PM


Bones and his fellow "people without visable fathers"
stick together.  

We have no choice.  

We don’t have daddies
to take our part.  

It’s one for all,
and all for one.  

It’s us against the world.

Bobby


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Osprey
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1 posted 2009-05-14 03:02 AM


Yes, those 'invisible fathers'. It's little wonder that kids are struggling. They're continually being told what a useless bunch they are, and society will reap what it sows.
Well... not everyone will be telling them that(winks)

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2009-05-14 08:38 AM


Thanks Osprey,

I tried to use the "B" word to describe Bones and my self, but the site wouldn't allow it.  It's not a "bad" word, and Bones and I arn't bad people.

Bobby

Billie Cullimore
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3 posted 2009-05-15 02:36 AM


Dear Bobby
For those with out a visable father, you must remember, we all have a father in Heaven that hears our cries. Try Him, you'll like Him.
Billie C.

2islander2
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4 posted 2009-05-15 04:23 AM


Hi Bobby

something of robin hood I guess, thank you for the poem.

yann

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2009-05-15 08:10 AM


Thanks dear Billie,

You're a sweet heart.  

My Father in Heaven and I have always been very close.  

Thanks for your support, and good thinking.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2009-05-15 08:14 AM


Thanks Yann,

There is a certain commonality.  

Thanks for your kind comment, I always have been a great fan of Robin Hood.

Bobby

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7 posted 2009-05-19 10:30 AM


I love Bones' ability to adapt... He could easily waste time whining about his fate... but he shows strength instead. *S*
Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2009-05-19 10:40 AM


Thanks dear Suthern,

You have the right idea Hon.  Bones learned way early on that there's no money whatsoever in whining.  He would never even think of doing it.

Love Bobby

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